Just before I start I wanted to say a couple of things about this story. To
start off if this was a movie it would at least be rated M if not MA so
like I said in my previous post if you are under 13 please check with your
parents before reading this. The other thing is this story is kind of open
ended because I not quite sure if it is finished or not, I didn't get any
comments back from my quick question post so I’m just kind of assuming that you
guys don't really care to much whether they are finished or not. Also
today I am going to post a new section on my website which will be for any
questions you might have about me or my stories. So yeah that will be up
soon hopefully. Just before I finish I wanted to tell you guys that I actually
got the prompt for this story on Pinterest (if you want to follow me on Pinterest
my name is Zoe Everdeen) so here the picture I got the prompt from.

Yeah that's about it for this post. As always I’m open to any feedback
and without further ado scroll on to read Not So Original Murder
Not So Original Murder
It is 12 o'clock at night and you
swear you can hear someone in the kitchen yet you are home alone. Quietly as
possible you slip out of bed careful not to make it squeak. Silently you walk
down the hall the only sound your bare feet padding across the ground. You can
now see that the light is on in the kitchen your heart races as you call out
“hello” your voice echoes down the hall
“I’m in
the kitchen want a sandwich?” you jump about a mile high there really is
someone in your Kitchen. Nervously you pad in a girl is sitting at your bench
carefully making a sandwich for herself. As you walk in she turns to look at
you smiling. You swear you know her face from somewhere you just can't place
it. She smiles at you “so do you want on or not?” You can do nothing but nod
she collects some things from your pantry and begins. As she makes it you
can’t help but notice that her fingers are stained with blood. You start to
panic why the hell as her fingers stained with blood? She turns around to face
you smiling. You panic almost yelling at her “actually no I’m
not hungry”. The smile leaves her face
“OK then”
she say through gritted teeth thrusting her hand into her pocket. “What a waste
I made it just for you”
“What-what
was in it?” You say your voice trembling.
“Oh you
know the usual ham, cheese, tomato, cucumber, poison to ” suddenly she flings
her body at you pushing you to the wall and drawing a long kitchen style knife
out of here pocket. Quickly she pushes the knife into your neck. A quick Simple
death your vision blurs as you stumble over. That when you remember where you
know her face from. All the wanted signs pasted around the block.
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